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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Charzy on Thu Aug 20, 2015 5:09 pm

Hellorp, accepted.
Appe, accepted on the condition that you never spell "Sunni" as "Sunny" again.

Boris, a few things.
One, please use English for the name of your country. I let Warrior's slide because I figured nobody else would do it, but it looks like that was a mistake.
Two, your history should be less of the history of real-world Japan, and far more in detail about the events that caused the timeline to diverge from ours.

Fix those and I'll read over it again.

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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by borisperrons on Thu Aug 20, 2015 5:36 pm

Yes, it is about that. Onin war is a real life event, that in this timeline was exacerbated by the Korean invasion, plunging the country in an even worse anarchy than compared to OTL. Oda Nobunaga is another historical figure, that I use as a way to have someone rally the daymio against the Korean occupation of Kyushu. Since he was instrumental in paving the way for the Tokugawa shogunate and the ultimate end of the Warring Kingdoms period, his focus on the Kyushu expedition, and the wiping out of almost all the other powerful daymio, destroys the possibility for this to happen.
Without a powerful bakufu, the emperor is able to start an early Meiji restoration, relying on his godlike nature to gain initial support.

As for the name, I frankly don't see the problem, since Cziken too has a gibberish name, but I'll do it if it pleases you nanban.
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Charzy on Thu Aug 20, 2015 6:43 pm

Boris accepted on the condition that he never spell "Daimyo" as "Daymio" again.
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by MysticPing on Fri Aug 21, 2015 10:33 pm

Updated Map

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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Warriorbulb on Sat Aug 22, 2015 1:26 am

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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Yuriski on Sat Aug 22, 2015 5:29 pm

Guys, stop with the shitposting.

I'm looking at you, smiley-face in the second post.

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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Boggerm on Sat Aug 29, 2015 11:01 pm

Nation Name: Isinisa
National Flag:
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Zones of Control and Claims:
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Capital City: Baremo

Government Type: Kingdom

Economic System: Capitalism

Leader Name: Abramo VI

Ruling Political Faction: Baranek Dynasty

History: In the first uprising of the Jewish population against the Roman Governor the Romans were thrown out of Israel leading to turmoil in the small region for hundreds of years. In the year of 452 a particularly strong warlord named The Great Lord in the nation's official chronicles helped establish a single empire by assimilating the opposing warlords. His name was struck from official record but he named his family Baranek, The current ruling family. After the first city and it's regions were established The Great Lord's son, Dallan moved many of his people north in 606 to establish a second great city. When the Muslim empire attacked in the 630's the forces were repelled by a desperate assault from the army of the Baranek and many poorly armed civilians. The city of jerusalem eventually fell but the Muslim army was sufficiently subdued as not to be able to carry on further north towards the capital of the family, Baremo. Life returned to normal with the occasional battle with attacks by different Muslim groups. By the third time the city was founded, the Islam religion had passed north around the un-established border leading into turkey.

Claim Justification: The capital city was a successful Jewish rebellion against the roman empire and established a Jewish empire. Due to a streak of successful harvests a population boom, the cities and villages became overcrowded, and even though the farms produced enough food before the boom, a chunk of the population was forced to move by starvation. The third city was founded because of many of the same reasons, but the population was moved before food became scarce and it also opened up another body of water to fish in.


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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by MysticPing on Sun Aug 30, 2015 7:51 am

Things you need to fix:
You had Anti Aliazing on while bucketfilling away the other countries. Leaving lots of blur where countries used to be.
Your claims has 1-3 pixel black borders. You're ment to not have any borders and 3 different colors)

The sizes themselves though are fine. I'd help you fix this but im currently away from home and only have my laptop

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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Yuriski on Sun Aug 30, 2015 8:03 am

That leader name and party is also denied. Change it to something other than an internet meme and/or a racial stereotype.

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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Charzy on Sun Aug 30, 2015 8:29 am

You're also sort of forgetting the giant Empire of Islam on your doorstep. Whose holy site you're defiling. Who would holy war your ass until you died.
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Charzy on Sun Aug 30, 2015 9:53 am

So basically one cavalry charge destroyed the entire Abbasid army and they just sort of left you alone after that. Yeah, no. Consider that these are people an order of magnitude more powerful than you and that you and an infidel who is squatting on their holy sites.
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Dragonlizard98 on Tue Sep 01, 2015 1:19 am

Before I stake my claim is their an up to date world map?
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Charzy on Tue Sep 01, 2015 3:51 pm

I don't think so.
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by MysticPing on Tue Sep 01, 2015 4:04 pm

The one listed in the first page has the exact same claimed land, just that some of it have changed owners by now (parts of korea). I THINK. So it should mostly be safe to make a claim

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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Dragonlizard98 on Tue Sep 01, 2015 11:38 pm

ok good
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Warriorbulb on Tue Sep 01, 2015 11:42 pm

plis dont claim the interior of Iberia like Skype chat suggests.
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by twinky827 on Tue Sep 01, 2015 11:49 pm

Or do because Warrior doesnt have control over it lelel
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Dragonlizard98 on Wed Sep 02, 2015 12:58 am

I am going to take the Caribbean actually just need to create the nation so.... yea
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Mobius on Wed Sep 02, 2015 1:11 am

Arr lmao
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by MysticPing on Wed Sep 02, 2015 5:15 am

No shitposting mobius Razz

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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Warriorbulb on Wed Sep 02, 2015 8:49 pm

Dragonlizard98 wrote:I am going to take the Caribbean actually just need to create the nation so.... yea
If you're gonna be a native american nation, I can help you with historical basis to get to current tech, like I did with Mobius. If you're gonna be a colonial nation, it wouldn't make sense as there are no nations that have colonized yet.
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Dragonlizard98 on Fri Sep 04, 2015 12:20 am

Warriorbulb wrote:
If you're gonna be a native american nation, I can help you with historical basis to get to current tech, like I did with Mobius.  If you're gonna be a colonial nation, it wouldn't make sense as there are no nations that have colonized yet.
Sure, help is always nice, I will pm you sometime this weekend when Im working on it.
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by Warriorbulb on Fri Sep 04, 2015 10:27 pm

Feel free to do it on skype if you want. It's easier for me.
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Re: Encyclopaedia Territorium

Post by MysticPing on Sat Sep 05, 2015 1:38 pm

Now where to start?

Your history is too brief. (And doesn't work or make any sense)
Your claim contains other nations (should be blank map)
Your claims are all larger then 750 pixels
Your history mentions stuff from year 1861, even though the year is around 1808.
You scaled the map to 688 by 350. Even though it should keep its original size.
You also used anti-aliasing

I'd recommend you this excellent guide to getting started.

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